First attempt at poetry!
Published by Mysorean on Friday, September 16, 2005 at 3:25:00 am.
In response to this post on Swahilya's blog an improptu poem came up from within me:
Silence
Silence is illogical,
Silence is logic,
Silence is complete.
Silence is white,
Silence is black,
Silence is colour.
Silence takes me there,
Silence brought me here,
Silence lets me be.
Silence is me,
Silence is you,
Silence is us.
There is no beginning,
There is no end,
Silence is God.
Please be polite in your criticism. This is my first attempt at poetry. Actually, I have no idea why the poem came up. I just read the post and responded with the poem.
My colleague tried hard to resist laughter on reading the poem. Or atleast that's what I felt on seeing her read the draft of this post! I don't know how many of you are even reading these lines. You must all be ROFL! [Rolling On the Floor Laughing] Please do comment once you are back on the chairs!
Silence is illogical,
Silence is logic,
Silence is complete.
Silence is white,
Silence is black,
Silence is colour.
Silence takes me there,
Silence brought me here,
Silence lets me be.
Silence is me,
Silence is you,
Silence is us.
There is no beginning,
There is no end,
Silence is God.
Please be polite in your criticism. This is my first attempt at poetry. Actually, I have no idea why the poem came up. I just read the post and responded with the poem.
My colleague tried hard to resist laughter on reading the poem. Or atleast that's what I felt on seeing her read the draft of this post! I don't know how many of you are even reading these lines. You must all be ROFL! [Rolling On the Floor Laughing] Please do comment once you are back on the chairs!
